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Old 01-09-04, 10:07 PM   #11
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Hmm..

Close battle both of you have elevated.

Rappad
Your verse was good. But you need to be more witty. Most of your metaphors were pretty played. Vocab was simple... Nice structure. Overall your verse was alright.

Spitacular
Your verse was definetly elevated. You had the wit.. the punches and the metaphors. Everything connected well. Although the flow could have been a bit better and some of the lines could have been re worded for better effect. Overall your verse was better than alright.. Dope.

Rappads verse was dope too but Spit took this one in my opinion.
Great battle.
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