Thread: Token vs Eki
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Old 01-09-04, 10:31 PM   #8
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v/token

eki you came ok..but some of your verse didnt make sense to me..
a couple of lines didnt rhyme either

All his wins , a simple cover-up- becaouse he only faces newbs
Its like hes claiming hes high, but he never acctualy smoked herbs (fake)

^didnt rhyme..i even tried repeating it different ways to make it
if hurt your verse...
flow was there....and structure was good....but the punchlines didnt do it for me..
no hate man ..just being honest

Token....
good verse on your part..youv'e done better...but you still managed to have a few quotables...that i liked

I'll show you the spotlight.. At The Tunnels End
Thought you were moving the voters.. But it was just the wind

liked this one the ,ost for some reason...
flow was kinda blah....structure was there..
but you just out punched him...and came more witty...

no hate to either
not a bad read..but i know both can do better..
out...
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