Brothas on tha street call me MC Macabre/
I'm smooth as a Werthers when you take off my wrapper/
It's the bloodbath, the crimson red wrath/
I'll crumble you like a cookie if you step in my path/
I crush like a Tonka, niggaz call me big wheels/
Try to step up? You'll catch the dust of my heels/
I'm gunna break you, like a cheap Zellers Mic/
Or maybe chew you up like a lemon Mike & Ikes/
cuz my rhymes resemble chocolate, they tasty/
but yours are too hasty flow worse than the pasties/
tha only roll your on is being my red carpet/
You think you can beat me? Kid, that's farfetched/
Your pitch is inconsisten, ups and down like a yoyos/
while mine are Austin Powers shagadellic, with 3 times the mojo/

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It's like a Buzzsaw, when Dijits makes the cuts/
He's got 'nuff skill to pull even WU out they rut/
My rhymes are purebred while others be mutt/
I got more gold in my voice than the Tomb of king tut/
When suckas try ta face me, they get fanatical/
But I keep it coo, like chess, i'm tactical/

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Yo, this was my first real rap so i'm not very experienced 'n shit. Gimme some tips on how I can improve and become a better MC.