I Hope It's For An Audio, Cause It Sure As Hell Ain't Flow Good Written Here. . . Ya Verse Was Sloppy. . The Double Quotation Marks Weren't Necessary. . Punches Played. . Some Lines Nice, I Admit, But Of Course They'll Be Nice When I've Heard Um Before N Had The Same Thought. . Maybe If You Do This For Audio It'll Flow. . You Need To Work On Ya Structure. . Even Ya Lines. . Multi's Were Pretty Good. . I Mainly Judge Pieces By Flow. . So This Piece Was Below Average To Me. . Constructive Criticism. . Don't Get All Hyped. Pz.

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