your words have substance in this poem and what you said in it has good flow. from the first line to the last of the poem I saw that you consistently kept this flow and depth. Its unfortunate tho u gotta deal with women like that. i enjoyed.

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Ya shit is no competition like 'trucker hats' against some 'fitteds'
nigga I'll fade u away like J's on the ballin court in a 'arcura' wit 'tinteds' -mindkontrol

none yall niggas wanna see me...