Flyweight
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IP:
I liked your use of metaphor's but I think you should try and use them a little less, it seemed like you were trying to fit too much into that one verse. You shouldn't be talking about other artists like WU unless you can actually back it up, and try not to be to high on yourself...maby try writting with another topic in mind.
Anyways, it was good, keep it up!
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