lol... this was a good newb battle... good job both, but ima break it down:

punches - tak: duff line was good, t, u had ok ones as well

flow - tak: t's came off a bit at some times

structure - tie: both were easy to read

multis - none: didnt see any

opener / closer - tak: opener killed him

overall - tak: nice job both, but tak wins this

tak's opener was off the hook... peep the battles in my sig

vote - tak

...p'z