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IP:
Rocken Flames.....
Openin' The Package
He's A Vet? Naw Dawg, He Battling Me For That Respect...
He Won't Ever See me Like Blind People With Their Specs...
Not a bad opener ...but played you flipped the concept nicely but meh
Lightin' It UP
He Needs To Visit Wackness Emergeny Center For Help From Emerge*...
Cuz Word Perfect Flows Slower Than A Broken Suburb And Verse My Is Like Surge**...
Writing And Rewriting, His Verse Has No Connecting Punches...
The Dude Gettin Sacked Like Brown Paper Bag Lunches...
Can't Touch Me Even When You Throwin' Useless Strecthed Lines..
My Verse Leave Ya Paralyzed Like Gettin Hit With A Punch Of Mine..
^^some good creative lines, but not as hard as they could've been
Here Come The Personals
His IP Means He's A 19 yr African Female Havin' 50 Cent Write His Verse***..
After 50 Sees This, He Goin' Runnin' Off To His GhostWritin' Nurse!..
He's In Nuclear Concepts And Yet He Still Don't Understand The Concepts Of Rap...
You Should See The Crowd When He Performs, This Nigga Dont Get One Clap...
His Profile Says He 24, Need Some Spelling Lessons Cause You Need To Elivate****...
Word Perfect Has No Soul Mate Yet, Been Here Since Apr 2003, Still Ain't A Vet Thats Great...
^^That 50 cent line was gay, but you had some okie personals
Finisher
He's Another Chrit! Only Way He Got Those 3 Wins Is If He Bit...
Done Rippin This Italy Faggot, Im Juss About To Click Submit...
^^Good finisher...best part of your verse...
all in all i'd give this 6/10 consistant...but not hard...and good finisher
Word Perfect...
I can handle any DIME you spit like STOCK BROCKER-
Take you serious?
he already admitted to be a LIGHTWEIGHT JOKER.(avatar)
^^That line was good flowed nicely soft personal
to me battling is a full contact sport-
at 5-3 ,,,weather record or height…. your coming up short.
^^First line basic but the end line was good i liked that
Do reverse math… 5+3 equal you getting ate(8)-
injest then dijest shitting you out from a tight prostate.
^^LOL...that line was helarious good shit there
Say what you say but im better even in general aspect-
with lines as separated as punches thrown dislocated
(… nothing connects.)
^^Good line also...didn't rhyme as good as other lines but made good sence
Do this in stretched bars?why? you aint even up to par-
spelled ROCKEN FLAMES wrong.. for you “S” comes after an “R”.
………………………….ROCKEN FLAME®S…………………….
^^LOL...that line was dope...good shit man
Your style’s OLD you probably do this for a retirement pention-
VOTE ON BATTLES in caps? Your sigs even screamen for attention.
^^another good personal
By the way HOTTIE and I are together so stop trying so hard-
Take the name of your sig before you catch a stalking charge.
^^Good line i liked he flip personal
There’s no challenge you knew this from the beginning-
Quote :word, blind spits by tomorrow midnite
I guess you couldn’t see yourself winning
^^good finisher...i liked the personal in it
all in all i'd give this a 7.5/10
wordperfects verse was more consistant with punches that 50 cent line from rf just made his verse fall down....good job though...peace
Vote: Wordperfect
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