Tikki..
Great piece, I really loved how the title tied in with the theme; really emotional and powerful, the repetition of the last line in each stanza..Great concept, well executed..
>Grade one their drinking vodka in their spiked fruit punch
And grade three their trading drugs and not their lunch
That line was my favorite although the whole thing was very well written..It's sad, but true..And to put it all into such a well written piece of poetry really makes it that much MORE moving..
Really well done..Of course, I'd expect nothing less from my male counter-part...
Keep writin'..
Pz