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Old 01-10-04, 12:24 PM   #4
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nice battle im a break it down line for line

king crunches verse
You say it bad but i said-it-worse, you know sitting behind his computer's the only way ya get 'Mega-Hurtz'/
get left with a severed-verse, its like ya styles stuck on unemployment, cuz gazeebo it "never-works"//
lol! damn ill ass punchline one of the illest shits ive seen on a rap board before


You couldnt be professonal if you got a rappin degree at NYU/
Battling me's like undiagnosed patients, "what the hell is wrong-with-you?"//
clever lines

kid's not-in-the-'right-mind' what did you type-blind?/
look-and-you-might-find, only the strings to gazeebo tampons were taken-for-"tight-lines"//
lol.. nice use of mulites and dissed.. plus it flowed well


You-known like masturbating midgets, always been 'wack-and-lesser'/
While i act like strokes and "grab-with-pressure"//
played out line.. if i see another line bout midgets and sex im going to throw up


Dawg you tryin to get crazy is just usin the 'wrong-violence/
you claim an ill block but know its in LONG ISLAND//haha he was clownin on long island
weak.. there wasnt a hard diss in this line at all

I know theres this big east west fued/cause in NY you say dawg in La we say dude/I chew up NYPD and let the pork spew/ You "CRACK" me up boi, if i wanna elevate ill jus "SNORT" you//

weak closer to a verse

overall you started off tight in this verse.. but kind of fell off that line about your style must be unemployed cuz it never works was tight.. i give this verse a 6.5/10

gazeebos verse

You really shouldnt battle someone you can't handle/
You'll get dismantled and ripped to shambles, This kid will get cold feet like walkin through Iceland in sandles/
aiight nothing real mindblowing but still a pretty aiight diss

I Shoulda battled a pro, this MC's not worthy/
Flows is shunned, passed by, Nomads rather go thirsty/
Perdition worthy spits jumpin out the voice box of this rookie/
Spit fire all you want, I'm forever raw, you can't cook me/
first couple lines were wack ass hell but the last line was pretty decent


Like Tony Hawk's Pro Skater, I'm makin' this emcee Feeble/
The Only way you be labled sick...is at the home for diseased people/
this line was kind of played plus i think that ive seen it somewhere before i dont know if you bit but the shit didnt hit that hard


The only way you'd spit fire.....is if I ignited your lips/
You winnin won't happen.....like bloods celebrating a holiday wit crypts/
the last line about blood celebrating with cryps was corny as fuck

This cat's not hard......pushin 3 inch heeled Stilletos/
His intelligence level is that of a white guy lookin for directions in the ghetto/
You steppin to the stage......not knowin what rap is about/
You still couldn't spit solid even wit dry cement in ya mouth/
Without a choice, this kid was chosen to be celebic, he spits for the hell of it/
You could put prostetic legs at a supermarket but still couldn't sell a kick/

overall this line had alot of weak lines.. i wasnt really feeling much of it i give you a 5/10 for this



vote: my vote goes to king crunch on this battle he came alot more witty and had less corny lines than gazeebo did.. vote king crunch
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