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Old 01-10-04, 12:26 PM   #8
GeNiuS
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Long Day, Working, Slaving, Time For Sleep
Mind Is Weak, I'm Ready To Find Dreams Mystique

mult's an flow start off the hook...

Man Said He Was, Built From The Dead, But Started To Tilt N Spread

nice shit..type of stuff that makes yo think...

I See Myself As A Youngest Child, Runnin' Wild, But Strangely
A Petite Lady Tames Me, Arranges Me, Then Lifts Me From My Family

damn multi's an flow in this are absurd..lost it a couple time earlier but DddddDAMNNN..content is...trange to say the least hahaha

He Has Nothin', He Raps Somethin', But Has Drawn Blanks Like No Ink Runnin'

nice piece of wordplay to finish off...flow an content finished off REAL strong in this first part..only 1 multi seemed forced..nice

the riddle is simple, he loves rap
but it's tough to pull strings,
when you're playing second fiddle

haha nice piece...wordplay is there..dont no why i like that part...

autographs, where he signs his name big,
in hopes of big names signing him

the way you flipped that was ill...nice..

** How Bout Reviewing This Shit. . Maybe Quote Some Lines. . We'll Love You Forever And Possibly Offer A Piece Of A Pie. . Whaddya Say ? **

hahahahahreply to this...detailed ofcourse(Cos i had to read a hell of lot an my piece is like 10-12 lines long...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105566

thanks
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