Ok. . I'ma Break It Down. .

Dumb Kids need To Up-ya-Game Stuff's-da-same ya Stuff-is-Lame
Tai Boxers couldn't Knee-Us If they take da 'G' from my fucking Name

^ ^ ^ Nice Starter, Had The Flow There, The "-" Between The Words Isn't Needed, We Can Keep Up With It. .

Im Ill-n-Real yall Feel-tha-Skill?Best Believe Threats ain't Hollow-From-G
Wanna Stalk my Post an Hate...i'll Walk on Water....You Follow my LEad?

^ ^ Ill Two Bars Right There, Flow Still Good. .

The Illest with Wordplay..im Telling-the-Fact-is Im Smelling-ya-Whackness
Im Behind you Right?Naa..Cos I don't Follow directions like Rebellious-Actors

^ ^ ^ Pretty Nice, A Little Played, I Know I've Heard That Last Line Before. . Flow Still On-Point. .

Not Heavy-wit-Mack10's..Yall All Fronting..you Get Bent-over-Backwards
Drop Cyanide in the Air Vents..You KNOW when im Venting-My-Anger

^ ^ ^ Feelin' It. . Definately Nice. . I'm Still Lookin' For Mainly Flow And You're Still Spittin' It On-Point

don't need to be mentioned-ta-damn-ya..my beef Stampede an Trample-MC's
Jump ya for 'Ramp'ing-with-G Crowns mine in title shots im Battling-Thiefs

^ ^ ^ Nice Wordplay, Crowns. . Battling Thieves. . Nice. Flow's Still There.

Its Natural for me,Text is hitting,when I Spit to Rhythms Im rippin Systems
Yall who review me are jus Building my Ego..with all that constructive Critism

^ ^ ^ Ok Finisher, Probly Coulda Been Stronger, But Again, Flow Still There. .

I Judge All Pieces Based On Flow And How Easy It Is For Me To Read It And Follow Along. . So You Definately Got The Flow Done, Just Work On Various Things Like None Of The "-'s" (I Can't Think Of What The Fuck It's Called Lol). . Multi's Were Good, Everything Was Positive. . Keep Droppin' Man.

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