Fear of Losing, But he just wants to lose the fear

ill concept for that line i liked it...intelligient...

They are going wild, And the Host is approaching
To award the other man his award, He has rightly won

was decent but kinda lost the flow an main problem is the home bit after this doesnt rhyme..

He can't miss a step, For his feet are implanted in earth

ill again...but i cant find where the rhyme for this was..

overall nice..structured well...the multi's werent there that i like reading but this was decent...content was good for the limitations it had not being a punch piece or much of a topical...but the problem was the 2 words that didnt contain rhymes...its ok in audio sometimes but on text rarely works...

nice drop...drop some feedback on my piece please..

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