Hmmm decent piece. Word of advice...take it out all the excess symbols, they help point out, but it also forces you to point out multies and shit and its annoying. But when it came down to the concept, you executed it very well, showed some potential, but you did overdo it with the multies a bit, you could've kept it a bit more basic, but yeh...good shit.

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