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Originally posted by Born To Kill
Damn...
This was practically the same exact story.
How's a motherfucker to judge?
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Aight - you guys both takled the topic in the same way - tellin a story of this 13th diciple
LM did the whole judas thing which was interesting because i never really read the story -
sometimes tho i felt like there was a lack of a writers voice in the verse - i mean the vocab and words were alright it just really seemed like a narrative rather then your take on the topic...which is what i usually like to see in topicals
Taktik had the same kind of thing . . . you showed great wordplay skills with alot of hot multis and what not but like LM i didnt really see any personal connection with the peice...
so voice aside - this battle /(judged on words and whatnot)/ is going to
Taktik simply because it was smoother...but LM you posted a nice verse and overall a verry good battle...