If you do radio shit like this your production need to be way better.Sounds are verry "cheap".The beat that is played over the first intro drumsounds sound like a loop.The guitar line is solid.Dont use that swingtiming on the beat again cuz it reminds me of the Fresh prince.use different kick and snare-replace the string sound with something that sounds more$$
your voice is better than the production..I LIKE THE HOOK.
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