as far open mic diss'es goe this was pretty poor...

realise open mic disses can go further than battle verses because your not restricted to punching...you can drop humour wordplay an personals that wouldnt fit in battles....

‘Aint one “gangsta” real…So I Remixed Illusion into a Gangsta One

had so much potential yet was poorly used...

And it’s a fact…I heard it myself …The X.L.G. Album is worse than Gigli

same here you have the concepts you jus don't seem to have the skill of wording them...

The Insane Jokers could have been funnier…if they’re only joke wasn’t their lyrics

try an stay away from obvious easy to think of disses like this...

I thought it only happened once, but the Land Mindz always blow

hahaha....that was ill wordplay...if you meant blow an not explode...haha

They wanted to rip shit, but ended up tearing up their line up

second verse improving not great but decent...

Read their shit and you will seriously drop dead………laughing

this is really taking advantage of an open mic diss...

ok.this was amateurish a couple decent lines but nice concepts...i only gave such indepth feedback because i see the potential...its like me when i was new...jus need to reword things and practice....decent but below average...nice nonetheless an not a struggle to read...keep dropping nad reply on my piece

thanks...

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