Fuck RhymeTyme, I done said this shit as a joke… got balls to bite
With your sorta skillz…. Can’t hold ya dick never mind a mic!
Ya try’na fight…. But like the blind who’s try’na write
Ya wanna start reading brail… cos like them ya aint in the light!
Ya in the shadows like a ghost… in fact have ya got one?
Whys that, ya ask?… cos if ya have send him back, where he’s got from!
Cos this 16 year old child from Kentucky... hes barely old enough to work
at 60ish posts should take it easy… ignore that, ya couldn’t get any worse!
I would rehearse ya dialect… try an add something worth while
Cos at the minute the ‘Tyme’ to ‘rhyme’ for you… is like the Mona-Lisa try’na smile!
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aight............................................. ........8/10 verse ratio...........
nice wordplay.......................................... ...
good ryme scene............................................. .....
decent and overall good punches and personals......................
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yo, yo

Dev, if that is really yo name,
I'm going to put your alias to lethal lyricist shame,
your rhymes, are wack, when you pull the back attack,
you get smacked, on crack, and then, you get jacked,
trying to pull a another one, when I'm not lookin,
after i post my rhyme we'll see what this motherfucker was cookin',
if he isnt slow, the rhyme may get you shooken,
cause i know you cant write, all those rhymes have been tooken,
dev, you're blind to my ability, you got no agility,
with words, you rhymes stink like a guy, about to get curbed,
but anyways, you need to go back to the burbs,
you need to be battlin all the noobies and herbs
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aight............................................. ..................7/10...........
nice metas............................................. ..........
ok punches........................................... ....................
overall decent verse...........................................
but lacked creativity........................................ ..........
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Vote/dev..............................aight peace.................................