My Man,Ithink your first 4 bars of the first verse are the strongest.-Your voice just comes out better in those bars.After that it sounds like you pushing it-its not bad but you should have wait untill your 2nd verse...I like the flo in the 2nd verse but your voice sounds like you just smoked a blunt or your breathing over your chest-nothing wrong with that but its just not as good like the first 4 bars.
I like the beat but the intro is to long..
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Peace Kid
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