Thread: blend vs. bk
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Old 01-10-04, 04:11 PM   #13
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Your weak ass "attack" is totaly whack even tho your black
you can talk thats a fact now lets here you give it some back

Your committin suicide steppin up to blend
what are you doing can't you comprehend


Your fav. music is boy bands like b2k so u call yourself bk
beat of to that shit like justin timberlake cuz your a gay

you can't rhyme you got no punch and your literaly ill
your record is loosin and it will be after this still

Now come on let's here you roll out with some aaron carter
even his rhymes compared to yours are harder

the only thing shorter than your name is your shit
your girlfriend is more hung! and she has a clit!

You hold one winnin record, smallest cock!
you can't compete, my shit don't fit in a tube sock!

Im burning you wiht the fire like you was a candle wic
chockin up your rhymes cuz my blaze is toxic!

Now don't even show up, save some face
cuz all you wannabes are a fucking disgrace!

now man that was so easy it was sad,
but don't get mad, get glad!
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aight.......................structure............. ....................no..........
overall decent wordplay and rymescene................................
ok punches and personals.......................................
6/10................................................ ....
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ok ok saint dont act like a professer coz u aint blend,
and i never choke even if i dont press send,

talkin bout wat i can not comprehend,
y am i even bothering to battle i shoul put this to an end

now YOUR rymes are to immature like B2K,
maybe its becuz u Be~t0~GAY,

my records doing well, ccoz IM literilly ILL,
ill make u go to sleep like u took a bottle of benidryll,


i like boy bands? bitch u da one listening to Nsinc,
singin BYE BYE BYE, bitch your rymes stink,

that rymes sucked my nuts, stop actin toff coz your really FRAGILE,
like old ass antics, i drop u on da ground, u break and leak,

this is gon be your second lost, coz your not on your peak,
im trying to be bleak but u goda heed wat i speak.

6 feet deep thats the depth u will see. wen u fuck wit me,
deceased,neva see u again, bitch ima end this,wit a...
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aight.............................structure....... ...............no..............
ok...........................better verse overall.........................
had some creativity..................................
nice punches........................................... ........
overall/7/10...........................aight................ .peace.................
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