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to meat market of rappers cuz im carnivorous
Huge potential with wordplay on that line if worded better..
cuz i spit heat fire like a dragon
however simple played line like this will hold you back....
this piece suffered horribly from a lack of flow...an multi's but was still decent..got the potential to elevate if you learn how to utilise the wordplay fully...
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