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Old 01-10-04, 04:49 PM   #4
Gene Pool
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your structure was pretty wack could use some work on that match your lines up with each other a bit more cuz it takes away from the flow but other then that u had some good vocab and wordplay, could use some more multi's though. keep elevatin.
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