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Old 01-10-04, 04:57 PM   #9
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damn durastik dog you need to check up in the wackness emergency center fast.. your rhyme barely flows at all.. it reads like your talkin real fast.. the shit was choppy ass hell.. plus you lacked any decent punchlines or disses in your verse i give your verse a .5/10 lol.. word

and c lo.. your shit was wack as fuck for the first few lines but at least you came with more disses and more complex rhymes
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