nice verse.....keyed this....

After all the time I been waitin thats all you came up with?
Your structure is horrible and ur punches straight suck bitch
I could beat that verse by lettin' my little brother rip you
Took you hours to write garbage, thats another issue
There a few things you need to work on before battlin Tech
But in the saddle you stepped, no choice but to rattle ya neck
Anybody can rhyme a bunch'a big words wit simple metaphors
Your only hurtin ya self like U were Big Bird punchin metal doors
When I step in this thread it's really just a game to me see?^
Cause voters are laughin asses off, and not becuz of Petrafy

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