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Old 01-10-04, 09:09 PM   #8
.Iknoevel.
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Ace

..Punch&Personalize this battle..Make u 'none' like my crew..
I cud've decided to do 15 lines..
.........But forwardin' ur verse is the best way to clown you..
Lol...funny...i liked it, good opening
Herbs squirmin' in frontlines no other place on RB they're admitted..
Voted on himself with an alias..
..........................Then replied & claimed he was a hard critic....
So-So
^That last line..involved you an ur alias..you now see the clue?.
..Ur verse made the deadline..but.... then when's ur skill due..?
I liked it
.......Almost as expierenced as me in life..see his date of birth..
..........Also see his losses?.. you're currently reading his third..
Good personal....nice closer


Tyme

*Straight* Ace, might as well be *curved*, getting curbed,
scared to battle elites, so he goes for the herbs,
ha...u just called ya self a herb...lol
but thats ok, the style is conserved,
This bitch says he's straight, but he is gay, like he swerved,
Blah personal..coulda been re-worded and made better
I got so many ways to diss you that im playful wit you,
you couldnt win, if elvis wrote it, it still wouldnt fit you,
Elvis dont rap...dont get it
so stop crying dawg, i gave you a tissue,
This poker game is over, you got no more continues,
Blah..no punch..filler lines
So *Straight Ace*, you got played like a royal flush,
I just merked you, with a stroke of the keys at a touch.
Meh closer


Overall - Ace by a long shot
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