Presently Light...Waits
From: Hayes, VA aka Haze-where its hard ta see |
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damn.............its shitty everythings gettin mad slept on........nyce drops by both, flow almost ruined both also............tha breakdown:
Peepers: rhyme scheme-7.5, flow- 6, story-7, total= 20.5
Walter: rhyme scheme- 8, flow- 6, story-8, total= 22
nyce drops.......peepers yours was deep but wasnt as original of an idea as walters, vote walter, good luck fellaz, peace, 1
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