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Old 01-11-04, 07:18 AM   #10
D.Silver
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Dixie
How am I goin' to lose against these Xtreme Lyrical Gays/
You cant Merk A Nigga...I think you're Name's Missin' a"K"/
1st line, blah, flip on his name wasnt good either
Your own crew doesnt even really respect you at all/
Cause you play football with gay folks...without the ball/
naw
This fake B-Rabbit....rip off his foot and say his luck is up/
I run amuck..Kid is not wonderin when he walk up in clubs/
concept on 1st line is played, different flip to it but still...2nd line, blah
Gay Clubs that is..meanin'..he cant figure out What Da Fuck/
naw... single line too
Your rap's is far out..not a compliment..that means they're foul/
Only way your lyrics will peirce is if you typed in Wordpad's Bullet Style/
its aight, could of word it better
This Killa Kid got some solid punches...solid as a ghost/
I think he's just made cause LM told him to take "Holla at em" at his posts/
weak finisher

Decent verse at best and try not throwing too many gay lines, they become lame very quickly

Da Kid
wow, all that talkin and that's what you came wit,
sayin the same shit that 50 other niggaz spit,
weak...
If ya dix so enormous, u should be wit a bitch,
i'll send ya momma ova when she's finished suckin my dick,
naw
And who the fuck said come on Rb and fuck wit the Kid,
If i wanted ya frame of mind i woulda been split ya wig,
wording is terrible, lacked impact
u had to come and challenge me cause ya scared of Gazeebo,
nigga we know, that these hoes, shake like trees when G's Flow,
naw
and gay jokes, dixie come on change ya format,
I stepped in ya bullshit, where ya at i need a doormat,
nah
u think i can't merk u, yo u must be dreamin,
I'll piss ya fire out, u was hot but now ya just steamin,
nah

Alot of decent concepts, but ya wording let ya punches down

V-Dixie

Fair votes on these please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1064515
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1060300

I'll poll my vote soon

PiZ