KRAKKA
hey yo mr double o seven/
u a weakling ill spit hard rimes
at ya like u being attacked by bullets from an ak 47/
ill smoke ur lines all day 24/7/
naw kid thats wack...
then id get the munchies and eat ya like a bag of doritos from 7/11/
and then trow extra spits at ya like id hit the reazon/
naw kid...
u look scared now why u sweatin/
u look like you feeal threatined/
so come on back with ya weapons//
blah

Cant lie kid, that was pathetic... no punch, meta's were lame and no personals(And no just havin his name in ya verse aint a personal).Keep elevating though, try readin some vets verses and understand how they put a piece together.

James Bond
i aint got time for this battlin herb shit, but it like my watch is slow,
so i 'prickle' these 'herbs', clear weeds, just before i start to gloat,
blah uppin yaself
u left in such a state of paralysis, than even doctors cant diagnoze,
like cancer, you want no battle, should leave my expertise for pros,
wordings blah, ya shit dont flow either
this krakka aint ready for this form of hated lyrical warfare,
but i try, im cruel to be kind, so pain, hes gon get his own fair share,
nah
he like the white version of mister T, buecause his name like that,
if that the case, i only need to beat him blue, i hurt this cat,
booooo
i invade your personal space, like micheal and kobe bryant,
leave your fucked, and seeing sars like the belt of orian*
1st line was ok, 2nd wasnt

Ok Ok ya saw ya foes verse and knew ya gonna win, still don't mean ya drop garbage fo us to read

V - 007


Honest votes on these please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1064515
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1060300

I'll poll my vote soon

PiZ