lil jon
U fink dat ur it, but against me u aint got a chance
Im da new kid on da block and u is in for a shock
Me name be lil jon
Im a beginer, im fresh, im cool
and by the time ur as good as me, ill av treble the ability
wack, ya structures terrible...
dis guys been poppin 2 many pills
his vocal, his rhymes aint got da skills
boo...
you'll see me pushin round rappin master in a pink baby carraige
his life will be as long as Britneys marriage
1st line - GAY!2nd wasnt too bad
dis guys been poppin 2 many pills
his vocal, his rhymes aint got da skills
WTF!!YOU REPEATING YASELF OLD MAN!!
U should av felt my style, my rhymes flow like a river, im like poison flowing through ur liver
played out and ya lines older then cum lines
Im gunna end dis shit rit ere, rit now, im out,
iv killed dis guy, without a doubt
you sure about that...

One decent line.... tha rest?Crap....read vets battles kid, trust me it helps, read some proverbs too, ya drop mad wordplay off it, keep elevating yo

R.M
These are your last words, there aint gonna be no Lil Jon sequel//
unlike 1 plus 1, us 2 aint equal//
lol its aight
I just robbed this win from you like lyrical criminals//
my rhymes will have you see the light like biblical miracles//
naw
I elevated to excellence, been there, done that, and past it//
I spit rhymes that'll burn your throat like Citrious Acid//
naw uppin yaself
thinkin I wont attack you is like lightin a fire and expectin it not to burn//
you checked in, thats it, now its your point of no return//
lol could of flipped harder, but its ok
your better off with your cock in your hand//
cause your just playin with yourself if you think our equality stands//
could of hit harder
Ima school you cause my punches come in courses//
I'll burn you up with more rhymes then natural resources//
naw uppin yaself, aight punch
the Freestyle God, my lyrical skill will never supside//
cause when Jesus walked on water, I raced him to the other side
lol uppin yaself again, cmon man

Some pretty good punches, uppin yaself far too much though, but ya easily when this tho

R.M

Honest votes on these please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1064515
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1060300
I'll poll soon

PiZ