wud up, aiight we just had a battle so i know u can rhyme, i thought this wasnt bad.... the rhyme is nice, but work on length in lines and depth,,, lil work on that and u would have a tight verse, keep writin..... mayb try another subject...... keep elevatin! hollllaaaa

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my rhymes heatin up the track got u meltin like an icicle
this kid aint even old enuf to drive, whats he doin thuggin on his bicycle?!

Merked: NyZ GrIncH(5-1), dUrAsTiK(5-1), mcsnypa03(5-0 DQ)