Length does really matter with ppl because they dont want to read it occasionally. But, with this, it was just the right length. If you would have shortened it, it would have seemed like it was missing something. So the length is perfect. In a weird way, I can relate to her. The flow on this brought me right in, and when I started reading it, I couldnt stop. There was massive imagery, which made it even more perfect. I loved the story form of this. Made it seem even more realistic. Overall, I loved this. Amazing job. Keep it up.