View Single Post
Old 01-11-04, 02:34 PM   #21
TheUnderRated
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP:

yo kid tryin to confuse his names a diversion
like Tiki Barber fumblin his verse on a 2 point conversion
like old chuck taylors.... ya gettin kinda played...
got ya shoes cheap so less is what ya payed(payless)
i spit, ill shit, multis n punches the like to hit
my wordplay is fit, n your fake like Brit's, Tits(Britany Spears)
my verses come ill, while yours over the rim n spill
tryna shake my hand n missed, ya cant touch my skill
the dreams of future rappers i love to deminish
gun blast n u tripped at the start....
.....why even finish?

nice verse here you focused on multis and you definity got that category you kinda overfocused on multis though and lost some of the effect of your verse.......14/20


At 8 and 3, you decided to enter this battle so hastefully
C show you that your skill is all really just make believe
Ya structure is miserable, ya punchlines............invisible
Ya verse is just plain missable and my fists are hittin full
You copy and paste ya verse so you made a time limit
I'll still key up somethin ta serve and gladly shine winnin
I spit more heat than'a cookin' kitchen, I whoop and christin
This wack ass herb named Bugz-Bunny lookin like bitches
Can't you see dipshit? Ya weird ass Av isn't even legible,
I'd run wit ya flow but you slackin so mines is uncatchable


__________________

not a bad comeback you hit his avy pretty weakly so the personals were a little lackin you didn't really play off his name that well you had a few good punches though stay up and keep doing your thing.....13/20

real close battle guy but i think bugs took it with the multis......poll your shit if you voted on mine peace out..............
  Reply With Quote