smiley on ya mothers
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damn this was actually a good battle
check the breakdown
My ill verbs and nouns that cut your vertebre in half like im using scissors//
Im BIG like espn magazine pictures//
I am cutting ya up so I can hand you your spleen, and bounce round your intestines like a tramp-O-line//
You hafta get your own girl hiv testing every week to make sure that “tramp-is-clean”//
lol.. good use of mutlies shit was funny
Lemme introduce you tro my guilletene my skill’s obscene, I got more flavors then jelly beans//
I’m tryin to watch Freestyle Friday,and u jus tryin to think of “106” ways to get in “Nelly’s Jeans”//
lol nice diss
I'm viscous in every matter when my ryme's told//
You thought blind posting was typin wit a blind fold//
I'm high strung like i posess five lungs//
I have a poetically "alive tongue," and will get you "higher to heaven" more then a combination of "Mase" and a dozen "high monks"//
again nice use of multies however only the 2nd line of this shit was a diss the other lines were using mostly filler with the other line
overall good disses you had some clever lines in here like that shit bout 106 and park
this kid is infested with wackness gotta spray him with lysol/........
well see how it goes before this room becomes frightful/...........
i cant understand you your wack im ill like an infected skully........
cause me and you are very the oppisite from a hyperbole.........(comparison)
only the first line was truely a diss and skully and hyperbole do not match.. you cant have lines that dont match or it throws your whole verse out of wack
this is over before it started just give me a fair-ness-win........
this kid holds more things in his hands than mr garrison........
kid got has a crew full of dickriders and 50 cent biters...............
this battle is more one sided than a pitcher with only a slider......
youll causaily miss this win with my last line ill finish him..........
like an unneded builing im just totaly diminished him...........
aiight disses
overall vote.. both verses came pretty nice which is rare for a battle on this board i think that casualty came harder in the diss and punchline category.. that shit about tramp is clean and nelly's jeans were better and more creative than any disses that vendetta had.. however i feel like vendetta had a more consistent verse than casualty did.. however i give the wordplay to casualty because vendetta had lines that aint even rhyme..
vote: casualty.. im voting for casualty mainly because i think his disses were more creative than vendettas
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