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Old 01-11-04, 03:41 PM   #6
Menik
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This was alright i thought.....your structure was ok....just watch some of the lines length they were kinda stretched out on some of the lines though.....flow was alright in this.....you had some nice multies...overall a alright piece...keep at it.
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