Thread: Peace At Last
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Old 01-11-04, 03:46 PM   #3
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But this was ok......structure could use some work though....some of your lines were stretched out a bit, try to shorten them down and keep the lines the same length so it flows better....you had some alright multies....but keep at it.
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