I loved this peice coz I was goin through the same shit like a month ago and I dropped tracks like this.....they were called 'Friends no more' and 'Love you,Hate you'.
Anyway the flow was great and I loved the way you switched from calm and quiet to the anger and hatred. It was dope.
You vocab was good but this was like tellin a story so I wont judge ya on that.
Overall this was dope.....9/10
Hit this up.....one of my more lighter peices:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105926