[Petrafy's verse]
Yo im gonna rip this bitch he aint gonna-be-lastin//
Ill blind you spittin a stream of Hydrochloric-acid//
Till you stiffen up n fall on the floor-n-spasm//
Disintegrate you, So I can Snort-the-ashes//
Always have cum your mouth cuz thas the reason you spit sick//
The only time you beatin me is wit both your hands on my dick//
The only way we can have a real battle fight//
Is if you read other peoples lyrics and BITE//
Im like Bin-Laden and you are USA i keep you in fear//
The only way to make it alive is to dissapear from this stratosphear//[/Petrafy's verse]


It was a lil played
Punches were weak
Flow was ok......
Tried usin to big of words
Wordplay was weak
Personals were lacked
Overall........7/20



[tech's verse]
After all the time I been waitin thats all you came up with?
Your structure is horrible and ur punches straight suck bitch
I could beat that verse by lettin' my little brother rip you
Took you hours to write garbage, thats another issue
There a few things you need to work on before battlin Tech
But in the saddle you stepped, no choice but to rattle ya neck
Anybody can rhyme a bunch'a big words wit simple metaphors
Your only hurtin ya self like U were Big Bird punchin metal doors
When I step in this thread it's really just a game to me see?^
Cause voters are laughin asses off, and not becuz of Petrafy[/tech's verse]


Straight
Punches were ok
Flow was decent in places
Personals were lacked
Wordplay was ok...
Finisher sucked.....didn't flow
Overall..........11/20

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