^ mad short....the only way that would fill up an entire song is if you sung it...

repetive rhymes....it's cool if u stay on the same rhymescheme for the entire thing, but NOT cool if u repeat shit....how many times do u have to use the word 'guys'...and 'lifelines'.....shit

no impressive rhymes really....some decent ones tho

not very deep...and nothing worth quoting...

supbar

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