Yo im gonna rip this bitch he aint gonna-be-lastin//
Ill blind you spittin a stream of Hydrochloric-acid//
Till you stiffen up n fall on the floor-n-spasm//
Disintegrate you, So I can Snort-the-ashes//
Always have cum your mouth cuz thas the reason you spit sick//
The only time you beatin me is wit both your hands on my dick//
The only way we can have a real battle fight//
Is if you read other peoples lyrics and BITE//
Im like Bin-Laden and you are USA i keep you in fear//
The only way to make it alive is to dissapear from this stratosphear//

this was horrid it used played lines weak lines .....stretches lines ...fine lines....nough siad i give it a 5/20............

After all the time I been waitin thats all you came up with?
Your structure is horrible and ur punches straight suck bitch
I could beat that verse by lettin' my little brother rip you
Took you hours to write garbage, thats another issue
There a few things you need to work on before battlin Tech
But in the saddle you stepped, no choice but to rattle ya neck
Anybody can rhyme a bunch'a big words wit simple metaphors
Your only hurtin ya self like U were Big Bird punchin metal doors
When I step in this thread it's really just a game to me see?^
Cause voters are laughin asses off, and not becuz of Petrafy

ok could tell he really didn't try on this one but whatever he still took it i give that key a 12/20 not bad for a key...........vote tech......peeps these thanx...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105960
^elevated....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105864
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105893
^FL...........................thanx good battle...