gazeebo takes this

k-your verse was very weak u had some soft punches....u had 1 or 2 good concepts that were worded badly........u need to take the ~'s out of your verse that is newbish.......c'mon u have over 30 wins u shouldnt be doing that.......your verse was ok but lacked hard punches 5/10

gazeebo-decent verse.....u had some good metaphors and u had some nicely worded punches......but like K your structure wasn't all that great.......take the /'s of the end of your lines that is for newbies.........but other than that nice verse.....u had good punches and your wordplay was what won this for u...........

vote=gazeebo