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Old 01-11-04, 09:28 PM   #2
Koalatee
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As unfortunately short as this piece was, I did get an opportunity to see the topical prose that I am sure you hone. The intermittent metaphors that supply the ultimate metaphor (life) were a nice addition to the piece's quality. I'm sure you could do better, & hope to see an influx of Open Mic activity in the near future. I liked this line best:
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Life's a riddle, too bad we'll never get to solve it
It's our acid to base, but no water as a solvent

Cool . If you're interested, I'd be happy to put a Wp collab. together with you. Peace

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