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Old 01-11-04, 11:39 PM   #25
TheUnderRated
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like your custom title says "get ready to lose" cuz this a merking...
i fucked ur girlfriend,she liked it.. that tramp needs more workin...
you once were light but im covering your shadow into darkness...
this emcee sucks, he bites lines from "The Young and Hopeless"...
im lyrically stragling you, making you gasping, choking for air...
this kid has no life hes livin in a box and livin on well-fare...
Prophet, even your own church will be dissin u after this battle...
if u werent livin on well-fare ud be collecting chicken and cattle...
hang your self now so u dont feel the pain, my wraith"dopeness"..
one emcee up, one emcee down, im out, this battle is dismissed...


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not a bad verse kinda of weird choices on how to attack him as far as punches go but i'll give it 13/20...

10 lines eh....Should had already fuckin known/
I might as well put some hurting to this bitches dome/
Fuck...this is gay shit...im going to drop something thats about/
This bitch is so fucking lame...he needs extasy to help him out/
the pills will be poping into his mouth...down in his body sewage/
Chemicals extracting...Drains all his spinal Fluids/
man just quit already obsecure....Ur to fucking insecure/
Face the news..all ur getting is a -1 on ur battle score/
wait a second...Check ur av man....it proves ur a whore/
Damn....even that dogs moth is your only source to explore/


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hmmm nice closer but the X thing kinda made me go yawn so i'll only give your key a 14/20 i thought it would of been more towards a 15 but ....you keyed kinda sloppy my votre prophet hit these up honestly....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2
^FL
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105960
^elevated FL