Y u battling me?..aren't u the guy seekin newbie victory's?
You see?..Ape's so wak...he's the only monkey wit out H.I.V
U can't compete take a seat..I mean^Look what lies beneath
re-locate his denture's...I'm makin this pussy queef teeth
Wantin this due by saturday?like you've got sum sorta life
Admit it...This is a big one for you..an u wanna pre-write
Up-to date you been swingin limb to limb offa basic wins...
I mean I watch'd u step in elevated and u turned into Timbs
18-1 turns 18-2 after com and then 18-3 after jet's...
Now you wanna battle vet's...U aint no ape...u jus a chia-pet

solid verse not feelin the monkey hiv thing or the chia pet you had to be at your best in this battle and i think you just hit a lil pocket of writers block.....14/20...

Bitch, just look at that nigga dizzle, Jet gets more DR's than an ER Room
Jet's runnin' outta fuel, the engine of his verse are just runnin' on fumes
Just take a look at Carson's verse, this nigga sucks, like two Jet thrust ducts
Have this kid throwin' in the towel, quicker than a hindu before his haircut
Primates usually dont talk much, but from my verse...this Ape has spoken
And I see that you got OWNed like a quarter, nickle...or even a TOKEN!!!
Easily tackle and break the neck of his words, dismantle this Jet like Chad
I son you, and ya verse didnt have personals, remember...my name is "Dad"
This cats elevation stuck two feet in the air...like his punches, this Jet cant land
Biter?...Because you was sweatin' Conversion's punches like his fists got glands
at first i thought you were gonna do the same old jets stallin personals that i and any other person with half a mind could come up with but you flipped it well and you make some good links to look at stay up ....16/20...stay up....not your best...

peep these plz thanx....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2
^FL...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105960
^elevated FL.....