I agree....this was a real nice peice here man...I enjoyed the read...i liked the flow in this, it was real nice....your vocab stood out in this piece i thought, it was good....You had some nice imaginary in this, i liked that....the content in this was good.....i liked the way you structured it...i also liked how you ended it, it was nice...overall this was a nice piece, it made a good read...keep at it.