I enjoy how this at first eye looks like a simple diss verse.
But there is some witty wordplay in there.. nice.
The flow was excellent, which made for a good read..smooth.
Structure was on point..even.. good for a key..
A nice little read, nothin more.. & certainly nothin less.
Maybe some more direct punches, personals are hard on this kid, cause basically.. he's nothin..so you got nothin to base them on.
Though you had some nice lines..the link in the text..worked well for that particular punch.
For a keystyle i'd say this looks very promisin'.. Good job.