it was a solid drop...................maven came solid..........it lil choppy but had sum good multi's in there............nyce drop, edicius.....no hate but you fell off............had sum good ideas but nothin flowed properly each one of your bars was a different length and tha rhyme scheme needs improvement......lyked tha story...........but pay more attention to bar length flow and rhyme scheme next tyme, peace, 1

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