Good vocab here.
Flow was pretty good.
Not much wordplay, but the message came across pretty well.
Emotion was blah, but I didn't get that this was suppossed to bring anyone to tears, so it's cool.
All in all, 6.5/10

Nothing dramatic, nothing bad either.

Peace

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