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Old 01-12-04, 12:15 PM   #4
Dev
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thought this was ok..... the flow could have been better... the syllables were a bit choppy... thought the barz could have been a bit longer... but the scheme seemed to work alright..... the verses could have been a bit longer... and some good solid wordplay would have helped...aside from that.. decent little drop...pZ
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