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Old 01-12-04, 02:23 PM   #12
Born To Kill
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Pretty weak battle...

One guy didn't try...

The other was so elementary, I started hearing bells.

Skiddz takes this cuz his format was on track, a couple of hard punches landed, and his wordplay came together well.

The "remix" line was the best of this battle.

Illusion was too weak, everything was a simple meta.
Rhyme scheme was off, "more/war" in 2 lines, followed by "casualty/artillery" crammed into one line, then back to the 2 line scheme.

And that kind of shit was all over ya verse.

Get a beat, go from there.
That'll help.

No real punches, just trash talking.

Peace

Holla back...

Vote here, please!
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