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Old 01-12-04, 02:59 PM   #20
Dan_Da_Man
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those were aight lyrics waged in that battle, servin ur lines and flow need improvement although u stepped it up at the end, but then fell right back off at the closer, free i can tell ur a vet, not ur best work, but pieced together nice enough to get by.


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